Straight-A student completes assignment, is arrested.

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From the Chicago Tribune last week:

High school senior Allen Lee sat down with his creative writing class on Monday and penned an essay that so disturbed his teacher, school administrators and police that he was charged with disorderly conduct.

"I understand what happened recently at Virginia Tech," said the teen's father, Albert Lee, referring to last week's massacre of 32 students by gunman Seung-Hui Cho. "I understand the situation."

But he added: "I don't see how somebody can get charged by writing in their homework. The teacher asked them to express themselves, and he followed instructions."

Allen Lee, an 18-year-old straight-A student at Cary-Grove High School, was arrested Tuesday near his home and charged with disorderly conduct for an essay police described as violently disturbing but not directed toward any specific person or location.

OK, that sets off all kinds of alarm bells in my head, and not the kind that seem to have tripped for the cops and school administrators. The Wired blog Threat Level has been following up, and has what Lee claims is a faithful reconstruction of the essay in question. Here's the first part - read it for yourself:

Blood sex and Booze. Drugs Drugs Drugs are fun. Stab, Stab, Stab, S…t…a…b…, poke. "So I had this dream last night where I went into a building, pulled out two P90s and started shooting everyone…, then had sex with the dead bodies. Well, not really, but it would be funny if I did." Umm, yeah, what to wright about…… I'm leaving to join the Marines and I really don't give a (obscenity) about my academics, so why does the only class that's complete Bull Shit, happen to be the only required class…enough said. The model citizen would stay around to vote in new board member to change the 4 years of English policy, but no one really stays around to vote for that kind of local crap, so whoever gets there name on the Ballet with a pretty face gets to do what the (obscenity) ever they want with local ordinance. A person is smart, but people are dumb selfish animals. We can't make rules for ourselves so we vote others to do it for us, but we can't even do that right, I meen seriously, Bush for President?

The rest is more tame, though throws a few non-obscene jabs at the instructor who gave the assignment. And for this, they *arrested* him?

You've got to be fucking kidding me.

We have become a nation so afraid of our own shadows, and so enamoured of authoritarianism, that we're now willing to lock up some kid for what is at most a small bit of juvenile rebellion over a homework assignment. Challenge the system, and get kicked. Hard. What should at most have generated a failing grade for the assignment and a note to his parents, is now a matter for the criminal courts to sort out.

I don't know what disgusts me more: that the school bureaucrats are so afraid of being blamed for the next school shooting that they pulled this crap, or that the cops went along with it. This is the culmination of twenty years of the "Zero Tolerance" mindset, of criminalizing what in a sane world would be nothing but a bit of deliquency, of demanding adherence to arbitrary and bullshit rules. This is a manifestation of the notion that people can't be trusted to think for themselves, and that the good little sheep all need to be protected by the nanny state. This is how a free people become buried under the weight of their own supposed government.

Fuck me to tears. I 'came of age' in the 1970s. I was a good kid, straight A's, nearly the top of my class in a large urban high school. I got into one of the best colleges in the country, and graduated in 4 years flat. You know what? I took drugs in high school. I got into fights. I skipped classes. I carried a switchblade, and used it sometimes. I drank at parties, and did all manner of stupid shit. It was called *growing up*. And I turned out to be a pretty decent human being because of it.

But now, write something with a hint of violence, and a little criticism of the authorities, and people faint.

Sheesh.

Jim Downey

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Update.

From yesterday's Yahoo! News, an update that the student is going to be allowed to return to his school and graduate with his class:

The decision to readmit Lee, an honors student with a 4.2 grade-point average, followed negotiations with school district officials, said attorney Dane Loizzo.

"We all reached the same conclusion, which is that he's not a threat and never was a threat and he should be treated as such," said Loizzo.

Yay. It's a shame it took the intervention of an attorney to get this done. And it looks like the charges will be dropped, as well:

Loizzo said he will ask McHenry County prosecutors on Monday to drop the charges. "We're willing to consider the matter," Assistant McHenry County State's Attorney Tom Carroll said Friday.

You betcha. It was a boneheaded move in charging him in the first place. I can't help but think that the public backlash over this has made the local officials reconsider the wisdom of the charges.

Jim Downey

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decrepitoldfool's picture

I had this problem with two of my sons

...each of whom had a rather dark sense of humor. I received many calls from the vice principal of their high school, a man in whose fabric irony was deeply woven but who was intellectually immune to it. After kids 1 and 2 gave many occasions to tell the man he was a moron and why, kid 3 (even darker sense of humor) sailed through high school without ever being bothered.

Evergreen's picture

A Case for the ACLU?

It is one thing to try to identify disturbed young people; to intervene before any possible violence...but that has nothing to do with police & arrest.

If the teacher/school felt this was a disturbed individual they should have arranged for psychiatric intervention...not ARREST!!! Making this a police action instead of a psychiatric action sounds more like the thought police (or write police in this case). Sounds like a slam dunk case for the ACLU to me.

Are we wending our societal way to a mattress room mentality?

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Yes.

Are we wending our societal way to a mattress room mentality?

Yes. And that scares the hell out of me.

Jim Downey

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markbt73's picture

Straight-A's?

That's an awful lot of spelling and grammar errors for a "straight-A" student to be making.

Perhaps we should stop worrying about "disturbing" imagery (and hell, I wrote WAY creepier things for creative writing assignments in my day), and, I don't know, go back to TEACHING?

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I see your point...

Well, OK, a basic facility with the language is a good thing. But this was evidently an in-class, stream-of-consciousness type assignment, so I won't bitch too much about the kid's spelling. Sheesh, that's my greatest lacking in the skill department, and I've been a bloody newspaper columnist.

But I see your point in the stupidity of worrying about something like *haveing an imagination* and neglecting basic skills.

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Jared's picture

Zero Tolerance

I 'came of age' during the 90s, and was a junior in high school at the time of the Columbine incident. I was a good kid, smart, didn't do drugs, didn't drink, etc. I also had (and still have) a dark sense of humor and a certain tendency towards iconoclasm and rebellion against minor authorities.

During that same junior year, I switched math classes, opting for a non-honors version of Algebra II to cut my workload. The teacher of this new section was seemingly incapable of understanding my dark humor. For instance, there was a question on one test to which I did not know the answer. After working on the problem for some time, I gave up and next to an equal sign I scrawled the self-deprecating comment "...I hate my life." While this was mainly intended as a joke to show to a friend, I left it on the test when I handed it in. The teacher reported me to the guidance office, and I had to go through the rigamarole of talking to people there and explaining my stupid joke.

Later that year, we were given an assignment that involved working together with a partner. At the time, Ted 'Unabomber' Kaczynski was in the news and being mocked regularly on programs such as SNL. I found his name funny, and wrote him in as a second partner. This, the teacher took silently and did not bother to ask me why I would have written his name as a lab partner.

A week or so later, mere days before the prom, the school planned to do a 'mock crash' in order to demonstrate the dangers of drunk driving. I found this a bit ridiculous, and ironically commented to a friend 'Wouldn't it be funny if somehow I died at the mock crash?' as a way of pointing out how strange it would be to be critically injured at a demonstration putatively geared towards safety. Someone else pointed out that I would become a martyr, to which I sarcastically said 'Oh, yeah, I'm really willing to die for a cause.'

Well, this (in combination with my since-forgotten Unabomber joke) led to ANOTHER guidance referral the day before the prom. Apparently they had a 'two-strike' rule, in that I was not to be allowed unaccompanied on school grounds until I'd undergone a psych evaluation. The rest of the day, I was followed around by a security guard and then herded into a conference room near the principal's office. They searched my locker (finding nothing, of course). They even called my father, a dentist, away from his patients to come down and pick me up. I would not be allowed to go to the prom the next day until I had an emergency psych evaluation at an area hospital. The psychologist there found the whole situation absurd. Further, I had to make SURE that the fax the hospital sent to the school was received the next morning before I could return or go to the prom.

In the end, it all worked out well. I was even allowed to stop attending that algebra class for fear of persecution, instead spending those periods in the library completing assignments, tests, and quizzes on my own. But I'll never forget the hassle and trauma caused by a smart kid with a stupid (but by no means criminal) sense of humor, an overly-nervous teacher, and a school system unwilling to simply TALK to a student about possible issues. Such an irrational climate of fear and zero-tolerance rules is poisonous and has a chilling effect on the free expression of young people.

Grasping at straws and leaping up on a chair like the caricature of a 50s housewife seeing a mouse will NEVER prevent incidents of violence. Worse still, persecuting and alienating potentially 'subversive' types is only MORE likely to force their hand. Instead of trying to understand students, schools choose to suppress them for the sake of their own image and the appearance of 'proactive' strategies. It's a sad thing, really, when the illusion of safety is more important than strategies that might help potentially troubled youths. Very sad, indeed.

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Well said, Jared.

Yeah, your experience fits entirely too well with what friends and relatives of your vintage have related to me. And it seems that the effort to squelch that type of rebellion with rules, punishment and drugs is entirely misguided, and does nothing but push kids to the lowest common denominator of being a good, passive drone.

Perhaps that is what bugs me so much about it.

Jim Downey

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